Archive 02/27/12 - (2)

 

   

Perfect Poem

                                                                  

 

In preparation for delivery of the five-piece bedroom suite

Of modern Italian-made white-lacquer furniture

We ordered, just this past week,

 

You've been scrutinizing forty years of mementos

That have accumulated in your desk and nightstand drawers,

Disposing of most, for their irrelevance to your present life.

 

But when I arrive, Friday twilight, to begin our weekend,

You're excited to read, to me, the three letters you've found,

"Keepers," treasures you can't remember ever seeing,

 

Letters, dashed off on steno-pad pages,

From your dad, Murray, to his wife-to-be, Shirley,

During the summer of '39 or '40, before they were married,

 

Love letters addressed to his "Dearest Sweetheart,"

Unabashedly affectionate expressions of passionate surrender

To the young Brooklyn gal who'd captured his heart,

 

That knockout doll who resided not a ten-minute ride away,

And walked past his ladies'-clothing store almost every day —

The one with the blond hair, great gams, who'd captivated his soul,

 

To whom, with youthful bravado, he introduced himself,

She of shy demeanor, who, one unassuming afternoon,

Excitedly accepted his bold proposal of marriage.

 

And all I can do is sit and listen, transfixed, transported,

As you read, to me, your father's simple, unrefined words,

His ineloquent attempt at poetic measures:

 

Dearest Sweetheart:

       Received your letter and

was very glad to hear from you.

I was also glad to hear on

Monday that you left for the

country, although I was a little

mad at you for not calling

me up, but then I realized you

were in a hurry and had to catch

a bus so I forgive you.

       How are you and how do you

like the place where you are

stopping (Do you miss me)

is it a nice place (Do you love

me) How are you enjoying your-

self (I miss you terribly). Are you

getting enough sun so that you

can come home looking like a shine.

(I love you). Don't forget to think

of me at 12 o'clock just as we said

we would. (I love you). Write to

me as soon as you receive this.

       Have a swell time and don't

do nothing I wouldn't do or I

will haunt you. I love you.

                          Yours as ever

                                 Murray

 

When you finish, we read into each other's radiance

And hear, through time's ever-present past,

Not only those two lovers, in the romance of their courtship,

But us, in the ardor of our hearts' right now,

We four captured in the staccato tones, rhythms, cadences

Forming Murray's poem of perfect eloquence.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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